Positive
According to our audience samplers all of our continuity shots were in time, which means when we were linking up our titles with the rest of the sequence it fitted well.
Our music really suited our thriller as we had a slow beat when it started then a fast beat when our main character was running then a suspense piece of music would play towards the end of the sequence to signify enigma and make the audience keep guessing to what is going to happen next.
To follow on they also said that the suspense of our sequence was really well worked into the piece because it helped build tension and keep the audience guessing to what would happen next, which also helps create enigma.
We kept the dress code very strict as our main character had to wear black trousers, plain shirt, and to create even more suspense he had to wear white trainers and red socks to show the contrast between both of the colours. This fitted into the enigma because he had to carry a very heavy brief case across his chest which made people wonder why he was wearing that sort of clothes and carrying a brief case.
Negative
According to our audience samplers the way in which our main character ran into the camera was very off putting as his hands wernt thriller like because they were very restricted and tense which could make the audience wonder why they were like that. However, the brief case he was carrying was rather heavy therefore he couldn't pump his arms very well.
As well the samplers said he could have been running faster but as well this is because the brief case was very heavy so he couldn't run to his full potential.
One of the viewers said that one of the shots could have been swapped around to make more sense to them, because they felt that it would have worked better.
As a group we feel we have done really well and have recieved more positive comments than negative so this has given us a lot of confidence to exceed in this area of work.
